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Daily Deviation

January 21, 2013
Awaken by *shirua
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My latest artwork that I am hoping to submit for a contest.

Drawn with 2b pencil and A4 printing paper.

Color edited in Photoshop CS4 Extended.



Do comment and tell me what do you think about it :D
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2460x3476px 12.8 MB
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I'm not as good as you, but however, if you cold just put in a tiny but of. More substance like, her closing her eyes and the awkward pose..(sorry, but still) and you could try experimenting with that shade you used, I suggest, adding more 6B like dark tones, the drawing looks substance less, and could really do with shadows, Excellent drawing, most marvellous one ever seen, Keep it up girl!

What I reaaaaaaaaalllllllyyyyyyy like is the fluidity but yet stiffness of it all, it really is what keeps it together.

I think you should do paintings which require a lot of experimenting, (however, might kick you into an artist's block) so, can you do it?